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Light is like a feather,
Caressing your skin while you are sleeping.
Light is like a pebble,
Slowly rolling under your feet as you walk on the ocean shore.
Light is like a stone,
Weighing on your heart; pushing you to make the right choices.
Light is like a rock,
From which you can sometimes pull out the Truth.
Light is like a mountain,
An ideal that few of us dare to climb.
Light…
Is everything but weightless.
Caressing your skin while you are sleeping.
Light is like a pebble,
Slowly rolling under your feet as you walk on the ocean shore.
Light is like a stone,
Weighing on your heart; pushing you to make the right choices.
Light is like a rock,
From which you can sometimes pull out the Truth.
Light is like a mountain,
An ideal that few of us dare to climb.
Light…
Is everything but weightless.
Writen for the 100 theme challenge variation 2 number 3: Light
I got the idea when thinking about the fact that Light has an homonym.
This is my first attempt a free verse poetry. Please leave you comments!
Cheers!
Thama
I got the idea when thinking about the fact that Light has an homonym.
This is my first attempt a free verse poetry. Please leave you comments!
Cheers!
Thama
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I just love how the object used as similes for light always increases, until the last line when it all comes together, ^^